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en/OKBS_Softwar_ Package_Compilation_Platform_Instructions.md

@@ -12,61 +12,61 @@ dateCreated: 2022-03-11T03:17:11.341Z
 
 ## Access address
 
-https://build.openkylin.top/ For new users, please register a personal account, please note that the mailbox prefix will become the user's personal ID.
+https://build.openkylin.top/ For new users, please register a personal account. Note that the mailbox prefix will become the user's personal ID.
 
 ## Preparation before development
 
 ### Login and create ppa
 
-The operation is the same as launchpad, and the ppa of the openKylin distribution is created by default.
+This operation is the same as that of launchpad, and the ppa of the openKylin distribution is created by default.
 
 ### Add ssh public key
 
-use command
+Use the following command:
 
 > $ ssh-keygen -t rsa
 
-Create ssh keys and use the command as appropriate.
+First create the key, then use the following command if necessary:
 
 > $ cat ~/.ssh/id_rsa.pub
 
-Copy the output to the location of the picture
+Copy the output to the position shown in the picture.
 
-![添加SSH密钥](./img/添加ssh密钥位置.png)
+![添加SSH密钥](./assets/add_ssh_key_location.png)
 
 Click <span style="background-color:#448cff; padding:5px;border-radius:4px;color:white">Import Public Key</span> to upload.
 
 ### Add PGP public key
 
-Create public key command.
+Create the public key using the following command:
 
 > $ gpg --full-gen-key
 
-Supplement the relevant information according to the prompt, the RSA type will be selected by default, the length is 3072 bits and it will never expire.
+First, supplement relevant information according to the prompts. The RSA type will be selected by default, with a length of 3072 bits and never expires.
 
-Please fill in your name and common email address.
+Then please fill in your name and common email address.
 
-After the creation is complete use the command.
+After the creation is complete, use the following command:
 
 > $ gpg --fingerprint
 
-You can view the keys in the current system.
+This command allows you to view the keys currently in the system.
 
-Upload the key to hkp://keyserver.build.openkylin.top:11371 and execute the command
+Execute the following command to upload the key to hkp://keyserver.build.openkylin.top:11371:
 
-> $ gpg --keyserver hkp://keyserver.build.openkylin.top:11371 --send-keys <keyid 后8位即可>
+> $ gpg --keyserver hkp://keyserver.build.openkylin.top:11371 --send-keys <The last 8 digits of keyid>
 
-After uploading, copy the creation key to the location of the picture.
+After the upload is complete, copy the creation key to the position shown in the picture.
 
-![添加PGP密钥](./img/添加gpg密钥位置.png)
+![添加PGP密钥](./assets/add_gpg_key_location.png)
 
 Click <span style="background-color:#448cff; padding:5px;border-radius:4px;color:white">import key</span> .
 
 ### Configure the dput tool
 
-Modify the local ~/.dput.cf or /etc/dput.cf and add the following content:
+Modify the local ~/.dput.cf or /etc/dput.cf file and add the following content:
 
-LOGIN is changed to your own okbs account corresponding ID
+Note: Please change LOGIN to your own okbs account corresponding ID
 
 > [okbs] 
 
@@ -78,9 +78,9 @@ LOGIN is changed to your own okbs account corresponding ID
 
 > login=LOGIN 
 
-## Upload source package to ppa
+## Upload source code package to ppa
 
-In the source package changelog, the series code is set to yangtze.
+In the source code package changelog, the series code is set to yangtze.
 
 Please ensure that paramiko is installed in the system environment before executing dput.
 
@@ -96,10 +96,10 @@ For example:
 
 After dput is executed successfully, you need to wait for the server to process the uploaded files. You can view the processing results at http://archive.build.openkylin.top/dput-logs/.
 
-## Upload the source package to openKylin
+## Upload the source code package to openKylin
 
-Please send an application to the technical committee for the new source package. For details, please see [SIG group members and maintenance package change process](/zh/SIG使用手册/SIG组的成员与维护包变更流程).
+Please send an application to the technical committee for the new source code package. For details, please see [SIG group members and maintenance package change process](/zh/SIG使用手册/SIG组的成员与维护包变更流程).
 
-Upload openkylin-related ppa after confirming to obtain the corresponding permissions.
+Upload the ppa related to openkylin after confirming to obtain the corresponding permissions
 
 > $ dput okbs:openkylin <source.changes>